Friday, April 20, 2012

Life Is But ...


I
try
to open
the mind's door
and peek through stagnant ideas
with all my might trying to activate them
letting them flow freely without a hiccup, without a full-stop, onto the blog
how the hustle-bustle of life had paid a toll on my writing, tying  me up from keeping 
updates, denying my passion
 I am so trapped in the world of "busy-ness", with limited hours
grasping the moment though work grows into mountains 
but for the fuel of  life
  precious rice bowl
vital    need
sustaining
life


balqis
April20'12




18 comments:

  1. Even though you are super busy, you managed to pen your thoughts in this beautiful fibonacci. You are passionate about writing so nothing can stop you from following your interests.

    Take care dear Balqis! :)

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    1. Thank you so much, Sui. Your words motivate me. :)

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  2. This is so true. Always busy doing something. Lovely words and I'm glad you shared your thoughts too.

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    1. Thanks, Rum. Been very busy lately. :)

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  3. Hey Balqis, wonderful poem. Take care.

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    1. Thank you, Dana. Appreciate your words. :)

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  4. So WONDERFUL Fibonacci from you Balqis..:)

    Life is but...
    But, it's life,
    Isn't it?...:)

    Muaaahhh, love you my friend..:)

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    1. Yes, you're absolutely right! Thank you, Ros. :)

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  5. Thanks for taking the time to pen this beautiful poem Balqis. Life can be so overwhelming and busy, sometime taking a minute to pause and write is much appreciated.
    Take care dear.

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    1. You're welcome, Marie. I appreciate so much your kind words. :)

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  6. Hello Balqis..we all go through this stage and I guess I am also into it now heheeeeee..thank you for still having time to visit us..*hugs* ;)

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    1. Hello Sie! Nice to see you again. Life is pretty busy. Will surely visit everyone when time is on my side. Thank you for your comment. :)

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  7. Dear Balqis,
    I can so relate to this. Got my hands full in a little of this and a dash of that, but always have time for you sweet friend. Hope you're doing ok. Have a great week ahead!

    Her Breathless Kisses

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    1. We don't have enough hands to handle everything! Thank you so much for having time to drop by. I'm doing ok. Wishing you a great week, too! :)

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  8. Your words exude so much personal emotion, and you managed to form them in a beautiful sequence, making it all the more impressive. So long you give even a couple of moments a day to ponder upon your true passions, those "stagnant ideas" won't be lost and will certainly birth life eventually. Enjoyed your piece, and all the best to you.

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    1. Hi Tim! Welcome to my blog! :)

      Thank you so much for your inspiring comments. :)

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