This is the mystery of rain, it can give solace while it makes you feel your wounds more intensely.
The noises that colours put into music, and the blasting costumes reach down to where the feet touch mother Earth, and these caresses get an answer in the vernacular language.
Your haikus are a better expression in less words of so wonderful ideas.
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This is the mystery of rain, it can give solace while it makes you feel your wounds more intensely.
ReplyDeleteThe noises that colours put into music, and the blasting costumes reach down to where the feet touch mother Earth, and these caresses get an answer in the vernacular language.
Your haikus are a better expression in less words of so wonderful ideas.
Thank you so much, BB!!
I appreciate so much your kind words, Od. Loved your explications of these Haiku and that makes me want to write more!
DeleteYou're very much welcome! :)
the way you describe it in haiku Balqis, it is then also
ReplyDeleteThank you, Geli. :)
DeleteThere's only one cure for those itchy feet! Nice.
ReplyDeleteAnd that's to dance! I'm just kidding. Just couldn't come up with much better ideas. Anyway, I love trying. Thank you for reading. :)
DeleteWonderful expression,Balqis. I feet are itchy.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kindness, Usha. I'm smiling thinking of itchy feet as a warm-up before they really start the dance steps! :)
DeleteGo on have a good time!! The annual festivities and some unfulfilled desires??
ReplyDeleteAha...that's right! Thanks, Nanka. :)
DeleteThe feet itch to dance , why not , lovely lines :)
ReplyDeleteYup, why not. Thanks, Aunt Mary. :)
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ReplyDeletethe last line of the carnival haiku is grand.......full of energy..... :)
Thank you for your encouraging words, Sumana. :)
DeleteItching feet. - powerful line.
ReplyDeleteThank you, RP. :)
DeleteScratch those itchy feet: Dance!
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LOL...yeah, that's the right thing to do! Thank you, Teacher. :)
DeleteBoth well crafted and enjoyable - I like the itching feet to end the second one.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words. :)
Deletenice remedy for itchy feet..i'll try that one, hehe
ReplyDeleteLOL...give it a try, Ric! Thank you for being here. :)
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