May 18, 2013

What Beauty Is


















I am beautiful when I cry,
‘cause crystals fall from my eyes,
To save them is a must try,
Among the vapours in the sky.


balqis
May18'13

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 © 2013 Balqis

12 comments:

  1. I loved the hint of romanticism in this piece ... beautiful !!!

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    1. I just wrote without thinking of it, Green, but if you said so, I'm honored. Thank you so much. :)

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  2. You are beautiful when you cry,
    And you are beautiful when you laugh,
    You are beautiful on the whole and in half
    You are always beautiful, I cannot deny

    Be lenient and accept this horrendipity as a tribute to the wonderful quatrain you create! :))))

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    1. You wrote me beautiful lines, Od. I'm so impressed and appreciate it so much. So, it's not necessary to ask for leniency.

      I whole-heartedly accept your tribute which makes my day! Thank you so much. Your beautiful words will remain beautiful and means a lot to me. :)))

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  3. wow!
    it describes my feeling today...
    love the message..
    love the rhyme!

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    1. Thank you so much, Ric. I'm happy you like this post. :)

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  4. I always know I am so not beautiful when I cry. But this line makes us feel we are beautiful when we cry. hahahha. Good one Balqis.

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    1. I'm not beautiful at most times but when I cry, I think it makes a difference!
      I appreciate your comments, Christine. Thank you. :)

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  5. I think crying is good - it heals all pains and heartbreaks. Your poetry reminds me tears are beautiful too.
    Take care Balqis.

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    1. Yes, Marie, it's a good exercise for the lungs, too. Thank you for being here. :)

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  6. YES ,same here :) I am loving this post :)

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    1. Thanks, Aunt Mary. Your words elate me. :)

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