Apr 21, 2013

In Between
















between gloominess
the sun peeps through, wondering -
why one should be cold


balqis
Apr21'13

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    1. SubhanAllah, cipataanNya tiada bandingan.
      Kata-kata yang ditulis hanya percubaan hamba kerdil di dalam meluah secebis perasaan melalui puisi.
      Terima kasih, Condoriano. Kehadiran anda amat saya alukan. :)

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  2. Those lines are just perfect for the weather we are experiencing here at Sydney!!
    And also perfect for the feelings I am experiencing right now :)

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    1. We have plenty of rain lately. Everyday seems to be gloomy. Got the idea when looking at the sky.

      It's a coincidence with what you're feeling right now. I hope the wind will blow away the gloominess and bring the sunshine.

      Thank you for reading. Wishing you well, Nina. :)

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  3. nice....looks like its trying to tell me something much more..deep

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    1. Thanks a lot, Vandana. It depends on readers' perceptions to read between the lines. :)

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

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    1. Thanks for your warm words, Green. I hope it'll really bring some kind of warmth to the damp mood. :)

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  6. The sun is a snooper! A Peeper Tom!

    Why it cares so much about our cold! It is ours!!


    Beautiful for a lot of feelings from funny haha until funny gross, leaving a trace in the Romantic track!

    Thank you, BB!

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    1. LOL! I hope it doesn't imitate the sounds of Snooper and Peeper Tom . Yeah, you're right, it shouldn't be so curious. You know, it smiles thinking of what it's like to feel cold - something which isn't its nature!

      Loved your comments from all sides of it!

      You're most welcome, Od! :)

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  7. sun really cares about us , beautiful thought and post :)

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    1. The sun is the source of life. Aunt Mary, for your compliment. :)

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  8. What a warming post :) so deep in its simplicity :)

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    1. Thank you, Hotei. I'm happy to hear your kind words. :)

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