Apr 21, 2013

In Between
















between gloominess
the sun peeps through, wondering -
why one should be cold


balqis
Apr21'13

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Posted by Balqis DBJ at Sunday, April 21, 2013

16 comments:

  1. CondorianoApril 21, 2013 at 10:23 AM

    cantiknya subhanAllah

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    1. Balqis DBJApril 21, 2013 at 11:39 AM

      SubhanAllah, cipataanNya tiada bandingan.
      Kata-kata yang ditulis hanya percubaan hamba kerdil di dalam meluah secebis perasaan melalui puisi.
      Terima kasih, Condoriano. Kehadiran anda amat saya alukan. :)

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  2. Nina GrayApril 21, 2013 at 10:55 AM

    Those lines are just perfect for the weather we are experiencing here at Sydney!!
    And also perfect for the feelings I am experiencing right now :)

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    1. Balqis DBJApril 21, 2013 at 11:45 AM

      We have plenty of rain lately. Everyday seems to be gloomy. Got the idea when looking at the sky.

      It's a coincidence with what you're feeling right now. I hope the wind will blow away the gloominess and bring the sunshine.

      Thank you for reading. Wishing you well, Nina. :)

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  3. vandana sharmaApril 21, 2013 at 7:12 PM

    nice....looks like its trying to tell me something much more..deep

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    1. Balqis DBJApril 21, 2013 at 8:06 PM

      Thanks a lot, Vandana. It depends on readers' perceptions to read between the lines. :)

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  4. AnonymousApril 21, 2013 at 9:21 PM

    Perfectly beautiful! :)

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  5. Amrit SinhaApril 21, 2013 at 9:51 PM

    This is warming :-)

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    1. Balqis DBJApril 21, 2013 at 10:43 PM

      Thanks for your warm words, Green. I hope it'll really bring some kind of warmth to the damp mood. :)

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  6. UnknownApril 22, 2013 at 1:01 AM

    The sun is a snooper! A Peeper Tom!

    Why it cares so much about our cold! It is ours!!


    Beautiful for a lot of feelings from funny haha until funny gross, leaving a trace in the Romantic track!

    Thank you, BB!

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    1. Balqis DBJApril 22, 2013 at 4:41 AM

      LOL! I hope it doesn't imitate the sounds of Snooper and Peeper Tom . Yeah, you're right, it shouldn't be so curious. You know, it smiles thinking of what it's like to feel cold - something which isn't its nature!

      Loved your comments from all sides of it!

      You're most welcome, Od! :)

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  7. Aunt MaryApril 22, 2013 at 9:32 PM

    sun really cares about us , beautiful thought and post :)

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    1. Balqis DBJApril 23, 2013 at 4:53 PM

      The sun is the source of life. Aunt Mary, for your compliment. :)

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  8. HoteiApril 23, 2013 at 6:50 AM

    What a warming post :) so deep in its simplicity :)

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    1. Balqis DBJApril 23, 2013 at 4:54 PM

      Thank you, Hotei. I'm happy to hear your kind words. :)

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