Jun 15, 2012

Tears In The Rain



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O Flower of Purity, Why are you wilting in the showering  rain
when you should be so fresh and pleases the eyes of the beholder?
The sweetness of the smiles between two hearts had gone
in its place lies the  unseen tears in the rain, the soul battered badly
Flower of Purity, loving thoughts for you are for eternity
and engraved in the deepest fold of the heart, warming it from coldness
Your sweet scent will linger in the air,  a solace to a weeping heart.



balqis
Mid June'12

18 comments:

  1. Beautiful poem Balqis :) thanks for sharing.

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    1. Your words mean a lot! Thank you so much, Dana. :)

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  2. This is a pure delight Balqis, thank you.

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    1. You make my day! Thanks a lot, Marie. :)

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  3. this is is quite unique in contents.. from the usual love poems etc. great job balqis, you are very talented in this- have a nice day

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    1. You make my day! Thank you so much, Wan. :)

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  4. Very emotional, that is how I sensed it. Good piece my dear Balqis

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    1. Thank you so much for your kindness. It's always a pleasure having you here. :)

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  5. my comment disappeared again Balqis maybe blogger have marked it as spam again ;(

    I love the last line and reading it again brings me a smile to my face because the last line shows being still worthy and valuable even after the heavy rains had passed :0

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    1. Sorry about it. I didn't know what happened. Glad that now I'm able to read your nice comments. Thank you so much for liking the last line. :)

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  6. felice inizio settimana a Te...ciao

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    1. Hello to you, too! Thank you for being here. :)

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  7. so sweet and beautiful Balqis...
    always a pleasure to be here!

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    1. Thank you so much, Ricardo. It's always a pleasure reading your comments. :)

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