May 6, 2012

The Wish
















If I were a bird
I'd spread my wings wide
To you, I'd fly high
Endeavour the big blue ocean
The burning heat of the day
The icy coldness of the night
The blizzard from nowhere
I'd fly without fright
With determined heart
Defying barriers, I'll keep flying
Towards you who is waiting


balqis
May6’12


24 comments:

  1. I love all the lines, the words and the feeling that I've felt while reading your poem my dear friend Balqis..:) So sweet and very positive thoughts from you..:)I also love the image and the fonts..:) Keep sharing Balqis..:)

    More hug and kisses..:)

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    1. Thank you so much, Ros. It's so nice to know you felt the words. :)

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  2. This is truly a beautiful piece, so well expressed. I love it! ❤

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    1. Thank you so much, Sui. Appreciate so much your kindness. :)

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  3. I wish that I had the type of fearless courage that is mentioned in this poem.

    Such beautiful words, and I LOVE the photograph. :)

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    1. Thank you so much. It was a sudden thought and I immediately penned it down. Appreciate so much your nice comments. :)

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  4. I want to fly too hehe. Once again excellent poetry. I love the words , take care

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    1. Let's fly together, Dana. :)
      Thanks for liking this post.

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  5. hi balqis, i did wish for myself to be a real bird sometimes, all because i see many birds with beautiful feathers flying so freely.. a bird is always an ardent piece for poetry, romance and beauty. have a nice day

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    1. How nice if we could be one! Thank you so much for your beautiful response.

      Have a great week ahead! :)

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  6. My dear friend,
    Very deep and emotional!! This is my style. Very well written (smile).

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    1. Thank you so much, Andy. I'm honoured getting such kind words from a great poet like you. :)

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  7. Really loved it, specially the idea about being a bird... :)
    Visit my blog plz--> http://whereitshouldbegin.blogspot.com/

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    1. Welcome to my blog, Asma! Thank you for liking this simple poem and for your invitation. :)

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  8. if you were a bird then how would you write so cute poems? :P

    :)

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    1. I'm a unique bird with hands!
      Haven't you seen one? :P

      Thank you, Mr Smiling Waiter! :)

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  9. weeeeeeee..I wish I could also fly so high and be one with the sky..I love how you penned it Balqis..freedom is the most desired feeling anyone could have..visiting you ;)

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    1. Thank you so much, Sie. Missed you! Glad you're back with kind words for me. Let's fly together! :)

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  10. Happy to read you again Balqis even more with a nice piece like this one. The image your words draws is beautiful.
    Stay well!

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    1. I'm happy to see you again, Marie. Thanks for your compliments.

      You stay well, too! :)

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  11. You're a bird, Busy Bee- :))

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    1. Hi! Thank you busy Omo! I can fly! :))

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  12. I wanna be bird because they are free to fly, they don't have boundary or limit of their life. Thanks for the nice poem.

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    1. You're right! They seem to have much freedom. Thank you for reading this simple poem. :)

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