the love, the passion
shimmer under azure sky
thoughts link each other
balqis
Jan16'12
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*My dear readers, I love getting responses from you. You can interpret my Haiku in any way you like. Whatever I write does not necessarily reflect my state of emotion at any point of time. My writings are in different moods which I regard as exploring into many facets of life.
oh what a lovely haiku poem..=) so touching and passionate.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your nicewords.:)
DeleteThis is SO BEAUTIFUL, Balqis!!! This is why I crowned you the "Queen of Haiku"! *smiles* As always, the image is perfect!
ReplyDeleteOhh! The name of my next post, which I'm just putting the 'finishing touches' on today, is called "Passion" also! Great minds?!! My post is not a haiku so whew! LoL!
Thoughts are the predecessors of passionate lovers to link and entwine each other under the soft blue sky.
ReplyDeleteYou set a romantic trail on this haiku, BB!
It is unparalleled!
Your own words are really romantic! You bring out the beauty of love.I'm almost speechless. Thank you so much for your kind words. Appreciate it so, so much.:)
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Another lovely haiku!! I love it!! Thanks for sharing your haiku!!
ReplyDeleteKeep Smiling..have a wonderful day! :)
You're words and the image was perfectly match! It's a blast in my heart, the love, the passion, thoughts links each other..:) I love it!:)
ReplyDeleteBlessed Monday to you friend!:) Smile:)
Today is a super passionate day. I came across Pincesa Fiona's cinquain on the same subject.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love the way you bring out expression with a mere use of few words. I <3 it! Keep it up!
@~*Princesa Fiona*~
ReplyDeleteYou're pampering me beyond my worth. A Haiku Queen...Wow! the crown is too beautiful to be on my head! But I'm really honoured! Thank you so much for all your kindness. :)
I've read your "Passion" and I really loveit.:)
@Hisila - Thank you so much for liking this Haiku. Means a lot to me.:)
ReplyDelete@Sagittarian - I'm so glad to know there's a blast in your heart. Thank you for liking it. :)
ReplyDelete@Sui - I couldn't agree more. Indeed, passion is in the air! Thank you so much for your kindness in liking my little creation. A boost for me to write more. :)
ReplyDeleteNice one Balqis.... passion indeed keeps shimmering in the sky :), we just have o pluck it! :)
ReplyDelete"the love, the passion
shimmer under azure sky
thoughts link each other"
OR may be we can say- passion love and thoughts shimmer in the sky and WORDS link them! wats say? :)
Just my opinion , pls dont mind! :)
waiting for next post! :)
It's a nice one from you, Aakriti. Thank you! You see it from another angle. Poems are all about the different ways we perceive them. A nice opinion, I don't mind at all. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your comments. Appreciate it. :)
weeeeee..lovely haiku..you are so imaginative Balqis..you have a gift of letting your readers imagine your thoughts..passing by ;)
ReplyDeletebeautiful ! it's hard to interpret this because the meaning is too deep and the scope of explaining this could be very wide.
ReplyDeleteanyway, i enjoy it. lovely picture also :)
i love your thought balqis!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Princess Fiona my friend, you are certified the Queen of Haiku! And I feel no need to interrupt your haiku and thoughts, as I recently posted to one of the Professor of Poetry's recent entries, you are a woman of less words with enough feeling!
ReplyDelete@Sie - Weeeee! Thank you so much for the compliments. :)
ReplyDelete@Insp Saahab - Thank you so much. It can be interpreted in many ways - whether it's the passion as in love or just the passion of doing something. :)
ReplyDelete@Cindyrina - Thank you so much for loving it. :)
ReplyDelete@Prime - OMG! Your words are too nice for me. Who's that Professor of Poetry?? You surprise me! Hehehe
ReplyDeleteAn honour gettung this from you "a woman of less words with enough feeling." You never fail to amaze me with such beautiful thoughts. Thank you so much, Prime! :)
Hello Balqis.
ReplyDeleteAs you know, I am not one who writes to forms, but I do so enjoy reading your lines.
Azure is such a beautiful color of blue. I can see & feel the passion in your words.
Love that azure sky!
Thanks for sharing.
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn
Hello Andy! Thank you for enjoying my Haiku. It's written in simplicity.
DeleteYou know that I really enjoy reading your unique poems. Always written beautifully and really amazing! :)
I was looking for such kind of post since a long time to understand this topic in well manner. Now I am satisfied and got lots of thing after visiting this post.
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