Feeling
Strong, beautiful, great
Mystifying, intriguing, lasting
Lifting me in the gentle breeze to cloud 9
Emotion
*~*Princesa Fiona*~ of The Princess Passion invited us for a Cinquain poetic challenge. I learn a lot from her. This is my first Cinquain.
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*~*Princesa Fiona*~ of The Princess Passion invited us for a Cinquain poetic challenge. I learn a lot from her. This is my first Cinquain.
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I felt magic reading this, a whole set of emotions that rised in me and then dropped. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteBEAUTIFUL first Cinquain, dear Balqis! The image is one of my favorites! I have it in my files! We must both have great taste? ;) He he! Excellent work! :-)
ReplyDelete@Miss Lego - Thanks for your kind words. Always nice hearing from you. :)
ReplyDelete@ ~*Princesa Fiona*~
ReplyDeleteIt means a lot hearing beautiful words from you. You're my inspiration in writing other forms of poetry. It's like an adventure trying one form to another with your guidance. Thank you so much! :)
Oh..how nice! We have the same great taste! ;) Hehehe
weeeee..your poem is mystical too though it gives a sweet feeling..mine is mystical Balqis but with a fighter theme ehehehe..
ReplyDeleteI love your pix..the swan looks sooo nice..likey likey..clap claps.. it is so appropriate with your Cinquain ;)
I never heard of Cinquain before, I better try this way soon :)
ReplyDeletebtw, I love the way you compose this one, it feels different reading it.
@Sie - Thanks a lot for liking it. Yes, I'm talking about the nice feeling. Will read your Cinquain. :)
ReplyDelete@Aj - It would be nice reading your Cinquain. You better try. For more informations about it, please go to Fiona's blog.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for liking this composition. :)
hi balqis, great post, i share your feelings with you right now.. i am on cloud 9 too ha ha
ReplyDeleteThis is so wonderful Balqis :) I love it! :) You're really one of those who can penned easily, great Cinquain! Full of meaning and emotion! :) How I love to try it too, hopefully I can! lols.. Good morning!:)
ReplyDelete@cookingvarieties - Thanks a lot for your comments and feeling. Let's be in cloud 9! :)
ReplyDelete@Sagittarian - Thank you so much. I'm pampered! I'm sure you can write better than this one. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat start friend!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Aakriti. :)
ReplyDeleteSounds like euphoria of achieving something..something spectacular or an astonishing achievement.Nicely penned.
ReplyDeleteHi Rohit! Welcome to my blog! Thanks for your comments. :)
ReplyDeletewoah! is that you riding in the white..*thinking*..
ReplyDeletei never thought a parrot can float in the water..well maybe its long neck and big size made the magic floating..
a bee in boots wearing a mask..that's intriguing!
That's a giant parrot, you know! Of course, the bee's ready to have a party on cloud 9! :p
ReplyDeleteHey, choco Beanie, thanks! :))
very well penned Balqis.
ReplyDeleteit has been for a while since i last came here, not really a long time by the way. hehe
thanks for sharing anyway :)
have a great weekend :)
It's been a long time since you came here. This blog has been missing you! It is complaining not me! LOL
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your nice comments. I've read your Cirquain. You penned it well! I'm sure Fiona is smiling now! :)
So princess is in vogue these days :P
ReplyDeleteP.S. Happy new year :)may all your wishes come true in 2012
This is a mesmerizing masterpiece and response to the challenge of Our Princess Fiona my friend. I love your subject feeling here :) Anyway, thank you for the concern, I guess she will answer that on SB's new entry :) See you my friend :)
ReplyDelete@Dr - The Princess is always vogue! Where's your Cirquain? :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your wishes. The same to you! :)
@Prime - Thanks a lot for your very kind words. You pamper me beyond my worth. I just wanted to start off with one common thing Feeling which is very close to myself. Something beautiful. :)
ReplyDeleteOh! I'm anxious to know it. Looking forward! :)
Lol at that.
ReplyDeletethanks for your compliment :)
for sure we all succeeded to make Fiona smiling :) heee
I love this piece, few but powerful
ReplyDelete@Insp - Nice to hear your 'heee'. :))
ReplyDeleteFiona is a great lady and a poet. I love her works. She likes friends to join in the challenge. It helps us to try writing something new. I admire her for her works and her friendliness. :)
@Will - My first try! Thank you for your kindness. :)
ReplyDeleteHello Balqis.
ReplyDeleteI'm happy to see you have undertaken Princesa Fiona's challenge.
I'm not participating, but I'm enjoying reading those who are.
It's good to feel, to exist, to love. I LOVE the image!
Beautiful expressed.
This form & the Fibonacci are the most romantic.
Thanks for sharing, my friend.
Flower Of India
Hello Andy!
ReplyDeleteFiona is so kind to introduce to us other forms of poetry. Whenever there's a challenge, it's worth to try. I love trying something which I had never done before. By participating, it widens my knowledge in poetry writing. And I love reading your work, too.
Thank you so much for your nice comments. An honor indeed for me. :)