My
dream
so real
in the garden of stars
picking the brightest one among all the glitters
placing it tenderly in the basket of love, sprinkling it with the perfume of care
warding off even just a speck of dust, tending to it every minute of the day
guarding it well from the eyes of thieves
this star is my treasure
You are
the
star
* I'm inspired by Fiona's Fibonacci at The Princess Passions .
She put up a challenge for everyone to join in the fun of writing Fibonacci Sonnet. I like to venture and expand my knowledge in other components of Literature so, without further ado, I took up the challenge and created this very simple Fibonacci. This is my first try!
Thank you so much, ~*Princesa Fiona*~! We have just got acquainted but you already have a place in my heart. You are my source of inspirations! *
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She put up a challenge for everyone to join in the fun of writing Fibonacci Sonnet. I like to venture and expand my knowledge in other components of Literature so, without further ado, I took up the challenge and created this very simple Fibonacci. This is my first try!
Thank you so much, ~*Princesa Fiona*~! We have just got acquainted but you already have a place in my heart. You are my source of inspirations! *
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weeeee..you have written it well sis..Princess Fiona is really spreading her charisma all over our sites..she is one of the reasons why I was inspired to write a poem..she is such an inspiration to us..
ReplyDeletehehehe..guarding your star from those thieves..well said *blink*
Thank you so much, Sie. Fiona is so well-versed in her poems. I am always amazed by her excellent creativities.
ReplyDeleteYes, Sie, my treasure is priceless! I will do whatever it takes to make thieves stay at bay!! LOL...*blink,blink*
Ohh, WoW! Balqis, this is SO beautiful! You did an excellent job and you are the very first one who has posted the results of this challenge! I'm so honored by your kind words and you have much to be proud of by trying this new form! Bravo! :)
ReplyDelete*Waves hello at Ms. Sie* ;)
I hope both of you are having a wonderful day! See you soon *Hugs x 2* :)
Hello.
ReplyDeleteWoW! How creative! I agree with your sentiments too.
Very nicely done!
Thanks for sharing & visiting. Your comments are much appreciated.
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Wow! First try and you did it great Balqis!:) Even if you will not admit it, your piece shows how great you are in writing:) how I wish I can try it too! Sie is right, Lady Fiona is really an inspiration and a good example..:) Great job! thumbs-up for this!:)
ReplyDeleteWOW. Excellent Balqis. this is so sweet :)
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing. and i've posted my Fibonacci :)
@~*Princesa Fiona*~ - I feel so honored with all the nice words you bestowed on me! Thank you so much. You're boosting me to work harder towards writing a much better form of literary works. Thank you! :)
ReplyDelete@Andy - Hello! You know, I feel honored getting a WoW from a great poet. Thank you so much for your compliments. You make my day! Thank you! :)
ReplyDelete@Sagittarian - Getting another wow from you makes me float on cloud 9! Thank you so much. I'll treasure your thumbs-up. :)
ReplyDelete@Inspector - It's really nice when friends say WoW. Thank you! appreciate it so much. Nice to know you're also taking up the challenge. Will visit your blog. :)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem Balqis........and a very great start to fibonacci! :) looking forwrd to read more.........
ReplyDeleteWow, absolutely fantastic first attempt, Balqis.
ReplyDelete@Aakriti - Thank you so much. It's my first attempt and I have to learn more to improve it. :)
ReplyDelete@Samrat - Thank you so much for your compliment. It's just a simple one. :)
ReplyDeleteWow, what a beautiful piece! It carried a feel good factor. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up! :)
And I see Fiona has been inspiring many to write a Fibonacci sonnet. I too am inspired by her. =)
I came here before and was speechless. We have a group of artist in Brazil that did some poems with different shapes.
ReplyDeleteI'll give you the link.
I loved this one!
@Vinati - Welcome to my blog and thanks for following! Thanks a lot for liking my first Fibonacci and for your encouragement.
ReplyDeleteFiona inspires me a lot. I like her writing style. It's unique and beautiful. Thank you for being here, vinati. :)
@Ana - Thank you so much for liking it. This is something very new to me. Before this, I did see poems written in different shapes but I didn't bother to go deep into it. I was taking up Fiona's invitation of challenge and put a test on myself whether I could do it or not. This isn't good enough but at least I could arrange the words in Fibonacci's arrangement.
ReplyDeleteI would love to get the links. Please, drop them here. Thank you. :)
Wow another blogger who writes poetry. This is really nice. Keep the posts coming. New reader here. :)
ReplyDeletehi balqis - oh such a beautiful dream, i wish can dream just klike you on sucht great beauty and just myself be free and happy
ReplyDeletehappy sunday to you
@Wawan - Welcome to my blog! I
ReplyDeleteam happy you read my post. Thank you so much! :)
@cookingvarieties - It's just a dream. Nice to see you here. Happy Sunday to you, too! :)
ReplyDeleteJust great Balqis.
ReplyDeleteYou have a great way of using words and turning them to gold.
Awesome.
Thanx for sharing.
This is wonderful! Should I challenge myself too ? LOL, I still have to think about, anyway, this is written finely my friend! I truly enjoy reading this and you made me went to google again for help! :)
ReplyDeleteHello my B :) happy to see you here!
@Berlina - Thank you so much for your kind words. :)
ReplyDelete@Prime - How nice both of you are here! Your B(erlina)was a little bit earlier. Thank you so much for enjoying this Fibonacci. Yes, find out more about it. You should challenge yourself, too. It's fun! Looking forward to it. :)
ReplyDeletehi balqis, a very beautiful poem indeed,
ReplyDeletelovers in the galaxy of stars
always glittering
always full of smiles
Just amazing
ReplyDeleteYou got an award :).
@CV - Thank you so much for your kindness. :)
ReplyDelete@♥●• İzdihër •●♥ - Thanks a lot. An award? A pleasant surprise! :)
ReplyDeletei knew it has something to do with lady fiona and now you said you were challenged by her :P i was thinking of writing a fibionaci but then i gave up after several hours of thinking :)
ReplyDeleteHehehe...Dr. don't give up so easily. I know you could do it! You can create something humorous and write it in Fibonacci's style. I'm expecting one from you. :)
ReplyDeleteYes, it has to do with Fiona's Invitation of Challenge. Never written a poem in this style so I just tried my hands on it for the very first time. It's fun!
Thank you for being here. :)
Haha I love this, I think I'll try write one in like mmmm 3 hours (still need to go over 3 lectures :/)
ReplyDeleteNice one Balqis!
Hi Arief! Thank you for liking it. Yes, you can try to write one. I'll wait for it. :)
ReplyDeleteoh my! so lovely, this is very creative and sweet..
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Will. I was trying it for the first time. :)
ReplyDeleteYou did it too Balqis. First time I read but very nice.I enjoyed it a lot.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Marie. It's nice to get good words from friends. :)
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