Feb 16, 2015

Spark


Image


walking together
in the ebb of time, we pause
strengthening loose ends



© 2015 Balqis


My participation at Haiku Horizons prompt "Spark".

Labels: , , , ,
Posted by Balqis DBJ at Monday, February 16, 2015

26 comments:

  1. UnknownFebruary 16, 2015 at 2:27 PM

    Couldn't agree more! Sparking Haiku, BB- :))

    ReplyDelete
  2. Lux G.February 16, 2015 at 6:38 PM

    The simplicity of strong love.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Reading PleasureFebruary 17, 2015 at 12:25 AM

    Oh, wow!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Aunt MaryFebruary 17, 2015 at 12:25 AM

    How beautiful lines, wonderful Balqis :)

    ReplyDelete
  5. kaykualaFebruary 17, 2015 at 9:21 PM

    Given the bonding there is already it is not going to be difficult! Wonderful lines Balqis!

    Hank

    ReplyDelete
  6. rallentandaFebruary 17, 2015 at 11:22 PM

    Tender and loving !

    ReplyDelete
  7. AliceFebruary 18, 2015 at 12:01 PM

    I like your use of the word "eb" and the thought to strengthen loose ends. Lovely thoughts,

    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2015/02/17/oil-booms/

    ReplyDelete
  8. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonFebruary 19, 2015 at 11:27 PM

    lovely skills on haiku writing.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Balqis DBJFebruary 20, 2015 at 9:09 AM

      I'm humbled by your nice comments. Thank you so much, Maggie. :)

      Delete
  9. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonFebruary 19, 2015 at 11:27 PM

    Happy Day.

    http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2015/02/hyde-park-thursday-poets-rally-week-80.html

    the perfect poet award for week 80, please enjoy and have fun for next poets rally.

    simply visit our award link, and take the award to your blog, and nominate another poet for week 81, thanks.

    ReplyDelete
  10. UnknownFebruary 20, 2015 at 12:45 PM

    How romantic! ♥

    ReplyDelete
  11. ParmitaFebruary 21, 2015 at 9:56 PM

    This haiku tells me that I need to retrospect. Maybe it's because of the tone it carries. It's still a lovely read! :)

    The blogspot comment section just won't work on Chrome. I had to shift to Internet Explorer to comment (after several failed attempts on Chrome). :(
    I have added Disqus comment form on my blog. I so missed interacting with blog readers.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Balqis DBJFebruary 21, 2015 at 11:41 PM

      Thanks, Parmita, for commenting. :)

      That's the spirit - never give up! :)

      Delete
  12. Amrit SinhaFebruary 22, 2015 at 2:29 PM

    And that brings back the spark alive :-)

    ReplyDelete
  13. MarieFebruary 23, 2015 at 10:05 PM

    It's what people need to do Balqis. Love the way you penned it. I admire your haikus!

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)