I'm trying to find words to compliment your beautiful poem. In Bangla Literature there's a try to attach the longing to the birds, before the evening when they fly away in a flock.
Your words wonderfully attached that longing- the picture sadden that feelings even more! :)
Thank you so much, Omo, for your kind words and understanding of Tanka. This is my first try penning my thoughts in 31 syllables. I have been reading and trying to understand what Tanka is, and just a give a try for this one. :)
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I'm trying to find words to compliment your beautiful poem. In Bangla Literature there's a try to attach the longing to the birds, before the evening when they fly away in a flock.
ReplyDeleteYour words wonderfully attached that longing- the picture sadden that feelings even more! :)
Thank you so much, Omo, for your kind words and understanding of Tanka. This is my first try penning my thoughts in 31 syllables. I have been reading and trying to understand what Tanka is, and just a give a try for this one. :)
DeleteI like the Tanka format- it's kind of extended Haiku, with the extra 7-7 syllables. :)
DeleteSalam. Petang-petang, kalau dekat laut especially, mesti ada nampak scenery mcm ni... sangat menenangkan.. :) love your beautiful words... :)
ReplyDeleteWaalaikumsalam Lynn. Pemandangan di waktu senja memang menakjubkan. Thank you so much for commenting. :)
DeleteThose are songs of serenity :-)
ReplyDeleteAhh...I wish they aren't so. Thank you for reading. :)
DeleteMay them sing for you again so you can enchant us with your beautiful lines Balqis.
ReplyDeleteI keep my fingers crossed. Thank you for your kindness, Marie. :)
DeleteThis is intense, lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you, blogoratti. I appreciate your comment. :)
DeleteNice tanka Balqis and you've taken a good subject!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thank you, Hank. Your words are the encouragement for me to try more. :)
DeleteI also love to hear the song of birds , I hope the white birds will come again to sing for you :)
ReplyDeleteHow nice to know about it, Aunt Mary.
DeleteThank you for giving me hope. :)
Hi thanks for sharing, Come and have a look at The Meaning Of Iman - Faith over at ireminisces, and share some words, would love to read your comments everyone, thanks. Anyone feel free to add my "I Love Islam" button to your site its free!
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The pleasure is mine.
DeleteThank you for visiting and sharing the info of your post. Keep writing! :)