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my
dreams
seem real
everything so vividly
pictured here, in my mind
I could feel it , its beauty embraces me
my heart flutters and sends a gush of
excitement to my whole being
I wish to be in these dreams forever,
for they are mesmerizing and fulfilling my soul with the eternal beauty of
paradise
but alas, some dreams remain as dreams
floating freely among dots of clouds
without any special haven to land on to
slowly falling apart from reality
dispersing very faintly
into nowhere
leaving
me
© 2017 Balqis
** I posted this Fibonacci before. Today I'm re-posting it but this time I edited some lines.
** I posted this Fibonacci before. Today I'm re-posting it but this time I edited some lines.
Greatly done, BB- so nice to read your Fibonacci after a long time. :)
ReplyDeleteYou know, the pattern amaze me- and you've done excellent job here.
Thank you so much, Omo. It's always nice reading your comments.
DeleteAgain, much thanks for your continuous support. So much appreciated. :)
Impressive. Not only the poem, but the message
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog, Martin!
DeleteThank you so much for your comments and for interpreting the underlying message. :)
Very nice!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Wanda. You make my day! :)
DeleteI remember writing Fibonacci poems a long time ago! It's good to read one again Balqis.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day (or night) - not sure what time it is on your side of the world!
Would love to read your Fibonacci, Marie. Please, write again.
DeleteThank you so much for your visit. We are so far away at a different part of the globe. The moon is almost full right now. When I see the moon, you'll surely see the sun. Wishing you a great day ahead! :)
Such impressive lines. I am bookmarking this for the days I feel little unmotivated or if I do not feel like continuing my journey.
ReplyDeleteLoved it.
Thank you so much for your kindness, Epsita.
DeleteSorry for the late reply. Was so busy.
Thanks again. :)