The
Distance
Thousand miles
Are close at heart
Strong thoughts keep growing
Nestling warmly in mind
Nestling warmly in mind
Blooming like flowers of Spring
Beauty everywhere which is rare
We are lost in our own world for two
Beauty everywhere which is rare
We are lost in our own world for two
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Searching the hearts to see where we are
There is paradise within us
A feeling, so wonderful
A feeling, so wonderful
Sharing sweetest moment
To hold and cherish
Blissful always
Amazing
Let it
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balqis
Feb04'12
**My special thanks to Princesa Fiona of The Princess Passions for introducing Nonet. This is my first try.**
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balqis
Feb04'12
**My special thanks to Princesa Fiona of The Princess Passions for introducing Nonet. This is my first try.**
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Oh my god, this is great Balqis, so much emotions exuding from this post. I really liked it.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Ms Lego. My first try and I missed some lines. Corrections done! :)
DeleteThis is so beautifully penned and presented, dear Balqis! The colors are overflowing with BLISS, indeed! Congrats and thanks so much for participating in the Nonet Challenge :-)
ReplyDeleteJust a gentle reminder to let you know that each Nonet should contain 9 lines. Your first one has 7 and the second one 8 BUT does NOT detract from it's beauty! Just a little structure adjusment for next time *smiles*
Have a beautiful weekend! :-)
Thank you so much for your guidance, dear Fiona. I was waiting for you to comment. I've added the missing lines. I'm so glad you're always around and this time, personally guiding me with this Nonet. I'm so overwhelmed! I missed counts...my mind was among the flowers or could it be I was daydreaming! LOL
DeleteNonet is really something new to me. I appreciate your kindness in sharing poetry writing with everyone of us. :)
Wishing you a great weekend and looking forward for many more surprises from you. :)
I'm applauding your skill in adding the missing lines, Balqis! Flawless ~ one would never know that any words or lines were missing :-)
DeleteLoL @ you daydreaming in the flowers! It definitely could happen :D My new post kind of surprised myself but not sure if it will have the same effect on everyone else he he :-)
Have a *beautiful* week and it's always my pleasure to assist :-)
Hello sis Balqis..ok wow the colors are sooooooooooo wonderful..ehe you know me when the message always goes across the miles it always speaks to my heart with love hehehe..I love the pix too it brings a refreshing wonderful feeling to anyone reading it..passing by sis ;)
ReplyDeleteHello Sie! Thank you so much for your much appreciated comments. Always nice seeing you around. :)
DeleteI love how it was presented, and the words are as colorful as the way it was written.. another great piece! ^_^
ReplyDeleteHi Aj! Thank you so much for liking it. You pamper me by saying it's great! Thank you! :)
DeleteWow!! This is so wonderful! I love the color, the image especially the thoughts.:) Thanks for sharing us one great today! Muaaahhhhhhhh!!! :) Wonderful day Balqis!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the WoW! My Nonet still needs lots of polishing. You've done a great job yourself.
DeleteHave a blastful weekend! :)
Hello Balqis.
ReplyDeleteOMG! The colors are beautiful. Just what I need to see on this dull, stressful evening! (smile)
It's always a pleasure to visit here...even for a little while.
Keep on doing what you do...you're very creative!
Thanks for sharing.
Hello Andy! Hearing OMG! from you honoured me. Furthermore, your sincere comments and encouragement will keep me trying to write more and improve my poetry. Thank you so much! :)
DeleteI like the flow of your words. They were beautiful and gentle, like flowing water from a waterfall. The coloring of the words add a delightful touch as well.
ReplyDeleteI've been reading your blog for several days, and this is my first comment. I truly love reading your writings. You are quite gifted.
I hope that you will visit me at my new blog.
~ The Poetic Madame ~
Hello Poetic Madame! Thank you so much for your kindness. Appreciate it. :)
DeleteKnowing you reading my simple writings is an honour indeed. Thank you for liking them and for your compliment.
Sure, will visit your blog. Thanks for the invitation. :)
Brilliant Balqis! You penned it beautifully, the colours emphasize the title of your poem and it feels like your words are flying peacefully around. Very very nice, a great reading to start the new day!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Marie. I appreciate your comments. :)
DeleteJust beautiful! I love all of it! The words, the colors and the picture! Keep it up Balqis ! =D
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Dana. :)
Deletethere is paradise within us. lovely.
ReplyDeletethe whole nonet is lovely.
congratulation Balqis :)
Thank you so much, Inspector. I'd like to read your Nonet. :)
DeleteGreat! Beautifully and artistically written. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Princess. :)
DeleteBrilliant presentation Balqis! Loved the color combi..n the content of poem is no doubt beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat job! :)
Thank you so much, Aakriti. Always nice to hear your comments. :)
DeleteVery well done! It's vibrant and emotional. *☆*
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sui. :)
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