Haiku - Sweet Nothings
Lost in affection,
Two hearts beat in unison,
Hush, a sweet nothings.
Divine and blissful,
The songs of heart ring gaily,
Flame of love burning.
In love with Haiku,
Balqis
26th May '11
Thursday wee hours.
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I simply love this!
ReplyDeleteIt is so sweet and kind!
ReplyDeleteHush is the word and action when we face true love!
A wonderful Haiku, BB!
Congrats!
@Ning - Thank you for loving it. :)
ReplyDelete@Od - And it's a kind of hush and sweet nothings known only by those who go through the wonderful moments of being loved and in love!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your very nice words. :)
Two hearts, one beat.
ReplyDeleteTwo bodies, one soul.
Love is life and life is love.
A good love lesson or experience? :)
Suresh, we learn many a good lessons and experiences as we journey through life. At one point, we might have gone through such moments where nothing else matters.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your poetry-like comments. As always you excel in it. :)
Hush (read love) ringing the heart? :)
ReplyDeleteOmo!! Hush! Anything can ring anywhere! LOL
ReplyDeleteGlad that you're back here. Thank you, Omo! :)
Lost inside choco gallery
ReplyDeleteTwo chocos battle in beanie's mouth
hush hush, these sweeetttest things
Dark, plain and sticky
the taste of real yummmmmy
inside my tummy melting
LOL..Beanie, the choco lover! Are they the 'he' and 'she' chocos in the battle??
ReplyDeleteYou have a great taste! Thank you, Beanie. :)
Love captures my heart and soul
ReplyDeleteThe desire and fulfillment
My love leads to you alone.
Inexpressible joy
Unexplainable feeling
A love worth of my everything.
I give to you my all
My life,heart and soul
For you are my destiny
My Quiet Angel till eternity.
*hahaha..Balqis my haiku professor do I have a passing mark? weeeeeeeeeeee :) please at least for the effort please.....
WOW! you get a distinction for this lovely poem! Loved it! Please, write more! :)
ReplyDeleteYour Quiet Angel is looking after you. I hope your quiet angel is reading this right now. God bless! :)
Thank you, Sie. :)
i'm here again..peeping at ms. sie's poem...
ReplyDeletewow! she's in love..lucky quiet angel..
i'll give ms. sie a choco bar for those lovely lines..*reaching choco bar*
ok, i'll give her a bonus kiss too 'coz i'm generous..mwah mwah mwah..
I am the luckiest to have my quiet angel
ReplyDeleteBeany..*yehey I have a choco bar..and a bonus kiss blink blink..*giving more kisses mwah mwah mwah..
Thank you Balqis for your post weeeeee:)
To Beanie and Sie, I love your presence here. Makes this blog lively with so many jokes and laughter.
ReplyDeleteBeanie, you're so generous with your choco and kisses for Sie. Wow!Wow!Wow!
Sie, of course, you're the luckiest person being loved by your quiet angel. Your quiet angel is showering you with lots of love and care!
You're welcome. And both of you are always welcome here. Please, be comfortable and feel at home! :)
short and sweet :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Geeta, for your nice words. :)
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