Sunday Haiku

Haiku :  Safe And Sound

The essence of trust,

Folded in my heart of hearts,

Smile, it’s bullet-proof.

This  is my attempt to translate my Haiku to Spanish.

It is losing its 5-7-5 syllables, of course.

This is just to see whether it makes sense or not when  translated to another language.

Haiku : Sano Y Salvo

La esencia de la confianza,

Dablado en mi corazŏn de corazones,

Sonrisa, que es a prueba de balas.

I’m calling anyone who knows Spanish to help me correct the mistakes in the above

translation. Suggestions welcome to improve it to a more meaningful poem. Thank you in

advance.

Gracias. J

Love Haiku,

Balqis

Aug 28^th ‘11

Sunday

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