I feel like friends are a bit like stars. Together, we are a chain, linked together by an invisible link. I love this one a lot Balqis. Have a lovely day!
If you look closely on the clear sky there is a small sparkling star which is alone yet, it is waiting for its companion and then they will be together for Eternity. Maybe it is not the only one alone, in time all of them will be a complete set. :)
I feel like friends are a bit like stars. Together, we are a chain, linked together by an invisible link.
ReplyDeleteI love this one a lot Balqis.
Have a lovely day!
I feel it, too. Thank you for liking my humble work, Marie. Have a lovely day, too. :)
DeleteExquisite...!!!....close knit....yet so far :(
ReplyDeleteThank you, Panchali. I really appreciate your words. :)
Deletethe first line is powerful and ambiguous...love it....
ReplyDeleteIt's a pleasure reading your comment, Sumana. Thank you! :)
DeleteStellar wisdom!! Invisible lines seems to connect those dots in the universe.
ReplyDeleteThey could be there, who knows. What we can see they are so close to each other. Thank you, Reshma. :)
Deleteexquisite take and wonderful words ,Balqis !
ReplyDeleteThank you, Milan. :)
DeleteGlowing light that bonds afar- just like the souls comes closer being separated- :))
ReplyDeleteNice haiku, BB!
I visualise what you said, Omo. Beautiful feeling! Thank you! :)
DeleteThis is a beautiful thought, BB!
ReplyDeleteA joy, and contentment for the heart to share.
If you look closely on the clear sky there is a small sparkling
star which is alone yet, it is waiting for its companion and then
they will be together for Eternity. Maybe it is not the only one alone,
in time all of them will be a complete set. :)
I love this haiku, because it is close!
Thank you, BB.
Loved what you said, Od. Thanks for reading.
Delete"Close" itself could be interpreted in many ways. Yes, indeed it's so close but not reachable yet!
The pleasure is mine.
Have a nice day, Od! :)
They are together and they are alive. A nice view it is! Nicely Balqis!
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Thank you, Hank. :)
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